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     Peridot updated 10 years, 8 months ago 3 Members · 3 Posts
  • Silver

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    March 15, 2014 at 10:52 am

    Greetings I have a very simple task to ask of you Please in 10 sentences describe a simple wooden chair.

  • MooMooTree

    Member
    March 15, 2014 at 2:01 pm

    The wood, completely stained crimson, had been carved into an arch with three cylindrical wooden bars equidistant apart attached to the arch. The five ends all connect in a perpendicular fashion to a flat rounded off square of crimson wood. Four cylindrical legs are attached underneath the square almost perpendicular to the floor. The only thing between the wood and the floor are oval shaped beige plastic pieces. On top of the square, where the arch connect, a quiltish looking cushion had been secured with a bow. The cushion had a blue theme to the patchwork as well as had the feel of being a complete add-on. The only sign of age and renewal is that of black lettering and pictures found on the different surfaces of the wood. With a closer look, you could see the grain of the wood as slightly darker lines speckled through out the pieces of wood. It had a buzz of history about it. It seemed to be calling you in a calming voice for you to take a seat.

    Zabrian: I will give you an A- As the last part where as I like it because it gives a human quality to the chair and does help discribe it. it seems to me to be an after thought in the post. Good Job

  • Peridot

    Member
    March 17, 2014 at 2:06 am

    The seat of the chair contained a gentle dip in the middle, perfectly matching the curve of a human posterior. A thin layer of grey dust covered the seat, back and legs of the chair distorting the light tan color of the varnished oak. Underneath the dust, darker brown lines ran in a vertical pattern across the entire outer surface of the chair like tiger stripes. These miniature grain-lines were the only clue that the seat of the chair was in fact made up of several pieces of wood instead of one continuous piece. Light grey screws lay burrowed at each intersection between the different pieces of the chair. These screws kept the rectangular legs from wobbling or wiggling underneath the entirety of the chair and attached the horizontal cross-bars connecting each leg. Two horizontal wooden beams connected the cross-bars, providing extra stability as well as a place to store school books or binders underneath. The whole chair had a rectangular and no-nonsense feel about it with no added flourishes or carvings. Still, small touches such as the slightly curved back ensured that the furniture could accommodate a human spine and be at least comfortable to sit in. This chair would be perfect for a young student: sturdy and cheap.

    Zabrian: Good Job I will Give you an A- as the last sentence where as it does what is asked seems to be added just to reach the goal of 10 lines.

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