PJ is only trying to help, It’s part of our jobs as writers to accept criticism, even if we don’t like to be told that we made mistake(s). We write for readers or ourselves, which ever it may be. It’s unfortunately a part of growing and progressing as a writer.
I have not read part one of this so I will make no comment on part two.
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